UFS211 UNIT10: ACADEMIC WRITING (TASK 10)

Suster Ngesot  tells the story of two girls, who live near where their college dorm. They called vira and Silla, who are good friends with each other. Vira has a boyfriend, a student from australia named Mike. Vira and Silla occupied a room that once was never inhabited by other students due to certain reasons. The room turned out to save the mystery death of a former student named Lastri. Introduction between Silla and Mike, being the beginning of the emergence of mystery around them. Silla and mike apparently having an affair behind Vira, which triggers anger Suster Ngesot. Death will terrorize those who had an affair, the region dormitory. Before someone dies, it first appears in a green diary, which found by Vira in her room. Vira can feel there is an anomaly that appears. Mystery death of Suster Lastri  began to unfold.  Suster Lastri s was killed by her boyfriend, who is a doctor named Framle. Her boyfriend caught cheating predictably friend, named Eva. His body was buried in the walls of the room vira and Silla. Suster Lastri grudge to all the adultery. Finally Silla and Mike died, caused outrage Suster Ngesot, above the affair which they did, behind vira.

UFS211 UNIT9: ACADEMIC WRITNG (TASK9)

WRITING A SUMMARY

       

    There are a few ways in which the lie detector can be used. Firstly, this machine can be used without a subject's knowledge has been introduced in Britain. The Dektor psychological stress analyzer (PSE) is used by private industry for pre-employment screening,investigating thefts, and even periodic staff checks. Besides, in the US,the device is used for pre-employment interviews with questions such as 'Have you used marihuana? and for monthly checks with branch managers, asking questions like 'Do you suspect any present employees of cheating the company? that is prevent a manager from setting his own pace to investigate possibly suspicious behavior. Next, it also can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues totally unrelated to job , and then the PSE can be used without the subject even knowing, its inventors analysed the televised Watergate hearings and told the press who they thought was lying. Other than that, there are few objections found in this machine. First of all, one of the other two units was being employed by a private firm for pre-employment checks. It also possible to pick out a word or phrase that caused stress. Lastly, its a primary application will be in situations where people may not object such as pre-employment interviews.

UFS211 UNIT8: EDITING AND REVISING (TASK8)

  The Pursuit of Happyness, is story about a Chris Gardner is a bright and talented but marginally employed salesman. Besides, Chris Gardner is a family man struggling. Despite his valiant attempts to help keep the family afloat, while his wife Thandie Newton and his five years old son named as a Christopher is buckling under the constant strain of financial pressure. No longer able to cope, she reluctantly decides to leave. After his wife leaved him, Chris became a single father, continues doggedly to pursue a better paying job using every sales skill he knows. He lands an internship at a prestigious stock brokerage firm, and although there is no salary, he accepts, hopeful he will end the program with a job and a promising future. Without a financial cushion, Chris and his son are soon evicted from their apartment and forced to sleep in shelters, bus stations, bathrooms, or wherever they can find refuge for the night. Therefore, to despite his troubles, Chris continues to honor his commitment as a loving and caring father, using the affection and trust his son has placed in him as an impetus to overcome the obstacles he faces. If i were a main character in this story, I'll never ever give up to build up my family happiness. I want my family get a blast happiness beside me. I will always try my best in order to give a comfortable life for my family. Moreover, if i in his situation, I will use all my knowledge to some useful job, and establish some business that could help me to change my life and my family..

UFS211 UNIT7: THE NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH-1 (TASK 7)

UNFORGETTABLE CHILDHOOD MEMORIES

Anyone of you have a pet? Of course, I know most of you must have pets, especially cats. Just like me, I like cats, but it does not become my pets at home, because of the memories I cannot forget. Actually, this story started when I was 7 years old. I really like the cat. I was very taboo to see a cat; I would pick up and play with the cat and then I will kiss the cat, because I love cat so much. There was one day; I play around in my cousin’s ​​house. During the lunch time, my aunt told me to eat. While I was eating, all of a sudden a black cat which is quite big, jumping in front of me. The cat has made ​​me very surprised; because that's the first time I saw a black cat with a big body. The cat looked at me, like want to bite me. I feel afraid of the cat, so I tried to get up slowly, while bringing my food to another places, but the cat still followed me. I try to hit the cat use a broom, but the cat is still stubborn and trying to eat my food.  At that time, I cried because my food was eaten by the black cat. I hate the cat as well. Since the incident, I would have cried to see the cat. I also suddenly became an anti to cats, especially black cats. For me, a black cat is very creepy. I could hope that there will be no black cats on this world anymore. I started phobia to cats due to the incident. Therefore, until now, I was 20 years old, I don’t like cats. Although, many people say that cats are cute pets, I admit all that, but until now I still cannot foster a love of cats, like before the incident. However, I know many people love cats, especially females. They are quite strange to see my behavior for a cat, because,  to them I am a weird  woman that doesn't have  feelings, just because I do not like cats, but they're wrong, because even though I don’t like cats, I'm a pretty affectionate girl. 

UFS211 UNIT6: MECHANICS/GRAMMAR (TASK 6)

What are the common mistakes that u always do in writing? Do you find writing in English is difficult? What kind of problem do you face when you start writing? What are your suggestions to overcome the problem? Discuss.

          Common mistake I often do, when in writing, are the terms reorganization and adaptation sentences and grammar usage. I'm pretty weak in laying out a sentence, by the use of proper and correct grammar. In my opinion, the process of writing a topic, given in English, it is difficult if a person is poor, or do not know to use the English language while writing. However, for those who are easy in use English language, and can write in English, they are also not always easy to write something, because in the process of writing, a person must have a lot of knowledge, wise to organize and customize any use of the word, and also can provide ideas, which can be linked to or included in a literature. Furthermore, the problems I faced when I started writing that I often lack of ideas, and very slow to parse a point. Besides, I also difficult to organize sentences as well, because my English language usage, still at an unsatisfactory level, and my understanding in the English language is also quite weak. Therefore, my suggestion to overcome this problem is, I should be diligent to read and find additional knowledge through dictionaries, magazines, or books, and newspapers. Last but not least, a good way to improve my English language usage, is by hearing a word in the English language, such as television or radio, and I also need to be sensitive to those who communicate with me by using English language, because in this way, it can improve and simplify myself, in writing without there being an issue with certain problems.

UFS211 UNIT5: WRITING A PARAGRAPH-1 (TASK5)

      Water pollution is the contamination of water for example lakes, rivers,oceans, and groundwater. Water pollution occurs when pollutant are discharged directly or indirectly into water bodies without adequate treatment to remove harmful compounds. Nowadays, water pollution is quite prevalent. It is threatening life on the sea or in the river, as well as adverse effects on human health. However, this can be overcome by certain parties, which should  be environmentally responsible. There are several factors that cause the occurrence of water pollution. First of all, it is caused by improper waste disposal, where people today's love to throw garbage into the river or the sea near their homes. Besides, it stems from manufacturing. For illustrate, removal of toxic waste or chemicals from certain factories, which indirectly adversely affect, to the life in the sea or river, where the fish or plants difficult to get oxygen, due to the toxic or chemicals, which were superimposed on the surface water. Further, the use of fertilizers or pesticides used by the farmers for cultivation is the cause of water pollution, because when it rains, the chemicals will flow into rivers,causing pollution to the water. On the whole, water pollution occurs, due to improper disposal reaches, manufacturing removes toxic waste into the water, and the flow of chemicals from the garden to the river, which will give harm to human health, and at the same time, it threatened plants and wildlife in the water. 

UFS211 UNIT4: INTRODUCTION OF A PARAGRAPH (TASK 4)

     Writing process is very important to learn by peoples, especially to students. The writing process is like the mirrors, the way proficient writers write. There are five stages in writing process. First of all is prewritng, which typically followed by drafting, revision, editing, and publishing. It's include panning, research, outlining, diagramming, or clustering. Next stage is a drafting that need a independently from the students. On this stages, we put the information that have been researched into your own words, and writes sentences and paragraphs even if they are not perfect and read what we have written and judge if it says the meaning. At the third, is revising which show students how to revise specific aspects of their writing to make it more coherent and clear during mini lessons. Besides, it also is to make it better, which means we should think what others said about it. Further, is the editing that we can call as a proofreading, which is the purpose of it is to make it correct. The way is be sure all sentences are complete, with a correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation and recopy it correctly and neatly. Last but not least, is publishing. It encourage students to publish their works in variety of ways. The exact meaning of this step is share the finished writing to others, which involves the stages of development, copy editing and production. To summarize the five process of writing, that include a prewrting,drafting,revision,editing and publishing, they are the important things that we must gather in the step of writing process, because it will help us on how to write an essays based on the stages of writing to make our writing more greatly.