UFS211 UNIT6: MECHANICS/GRAMMAR (TASK 6)

What are the common mistakes that u always do in writing? Do you find writing in English is difficult? What kind of problem do you face when you start writing? What are your suggestions to overcome the problem? Discuss.

          Common mistake I often do, when in writing, are the terms reorganization and adaptation sentences and grammar usage. I'm pretty weak in laying out a sentence, by the use of proper and correct grammar. In my opinion, the process of writing a topic, given in English, it is difficult if a person is poor, or do not know to use the English language while writing. However, for those who are easy in use English language, and can write in English, they are also not always easy to write something, because in the process of writing, a person must have a lot of knowledge, wise to organize and customize any use of the word, and also can provide ideas, which can be linked to or included in a literature. Furthermore, the problems I faced when I started writing that I often lack of ideas, and very slow to parse a point. Besides, I also difficult to organize sentences as well, because my English language usage, still at an unsatisfactory level, and my understanding in the English language is also quite weak. Therefore, my suggestion to overcome this problem is, I should be diligent to read and find additional knowledge through dictionaries, magazines, or books, and newspapers. Last but not least, a good way to improve my English language usage, is by hearing a word in the English language, such as television or radio, and I also need to be sensitive to those who communicate with me by using English language, because in this way, it can improve and simplify myself, in writing without there being an issue with certain problems.

UFS211 UNIT5: WRITING A PARAGRAPH-1 (TASK5)

      Water pollution is the contamination of water for example lakes, rivers,oceans, and groundwater. Water pollution occurs when pollutant are discharged directly or indirectly into water bodies without adequate treatment to remove harmful compounds. Nowadays, water pollution is quite prevalent. It is threatening life on the sea or in the river, as well as adverse effects on human health. However, this can be overcome by certain parties, which should  be environmentally responsible. There are several factors that cause the occurrence of water pollution. First of all, it is caused by improper waste disposal, where people today's love to throw garbage into the river or the sea near their homes. Besides, it stems from manufacturing. For illustrate, removal of toxic waste or chemicals from certain factories, which indirectly adversely affect, to the life in the sea or river, where the fish or plants difficult to get oxygen, due to the toxic or chemicals, which were superimposed on the surface water. Further, the use of fertilizers or pesticides used by the farmers for cultivation is the cause of water pollution, because when it rains, the chemicals will flow into rivers,causing pollution to the water. On the whole, water pollution occurs, due to improper disposal reaches, manufacturing removes toxic waste into the water, and the flow of chemicals from the garden to the river, which will give harm to human health, and at the same time, it threatened plants and wildlife in the water. 

UFS211 UNIT4: INTRODUCTION OF A PARAGRAPH (TASK 4)

     Writing process is very important to learn by peoples, especially to students. The writing process is like the mirrors, the way proficient writers write. There are five stages in writing process. First of all is prewritng, which typically followed by drafting, revision, editing, and publishing. It's include panning, research, outlining, diagramming, or clustering. Next stage is a drafting that need a independently from the students. On this stages, we put the information that have been researched into your own words, and writes sentences and paragraphs even if they are not perfect and read what we have written and judge if it says the meaning. At the third, is revising which show students how to revise specific aspects of their writing to make it more coherent and clear during mini lessons. Besides, it also is to make it better, which means we should think what others said about it. Further, is the editing that we can call as a proofreading, which is the purpose of it is to make it correct. The way is be sure all sentences are complete, with a correct spelling, capitalization, and punctuation and recopy it correctly and neatly. Last but not least, is publishing. It encourage students to publish their works in variety of ways. The exact meaning of this step is share the finished writing to others, which involves the stages of development, copy editing and production. To summarize the five process of writing, that include a prewrting,drafting,revision,editing and publishing, they are the important things that we must gather in the step of writing process, because it will help us on how to write an essays based on the stages of writing to make our writing more greatly.